Posted 16 September 2014 - 12:34 PM
Read on my phone but no comments on layout. Was clear enough at least.
I think the first two posts were good - short and well written. I think it might be worth having a post early on explaining what position you are coming from (experience up to now) and what you want to achieve in your FCing, as well as some thinking behind why you are taking out specific fleet types over others. For example, why did you choose a stealth bomber wormhole roam for your first one when it isn't exactly conventional? Your reasoning behind the thrasher gang in that thread would be the sort of thing I mean.
I think doing that would also help you be more analytical about where improvements might lie and how to develop.
Otherwise, a good start. I'll link you on twitter if you remind me when we're both online.